- Description of a situation
- Identification of a problem
2) upgrade standard of living
3) better education systems available in other countries
Consequences -> 1) implicates the survival of a country's economy (especially in Singapore when we rely heavily on human capital)
2) significant risks on a country's security (defence against external threats)
- Description of a solution
Solutions to tackle the problem can be divided into two areas.
The first area works on the prevention of local talents emigrating to other countries :
- Maintaining a strong sense of identity among citizens
- Nurturing the growth of Small and Medium Enterprises (SMEs)
- Increasing productivity of current workforce (skills upgrading)
The second area focuses on attracting foreign talents
- Strategic open-door policy
- Offer scholarships to students around the world
- Encourage foreign businesses
- Entice Singaporeans abroad to return to Singapore
- Evaluation of a solution
Hi Chelsea,
ReplyDeleteYour preparation information is good as it covers all the essential information that is needed to write for the essay. I also think it is good that you divided the solutions into 2 main area, one on emigrating and the other one on attracting. This helps us to better understand the whole idea of the essay.
I have one suggestion here:
I think it will be even better if you can explain a bit more on the situation (brain drain).
Thank you (:
Claire